Searria H.

I'm truly sorry for your loss. I know that isn't much for comfort. I really respect you for writing this so soon and sharing with us. I just have a ...

Hi, NL! Welcome to YWS! :) It's very nice to meet you! I'm Searria, but most people just call me "Sea." Wow, it looks like you write quite a variety ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS. I'm Searria, although most people just call me "Sea." oh yeah, how do you get a profile picture? Near the top of your screen, under the ...

This was nice! I almost think you could take this and make it into a whole other short story. :D I'll start with praise. You have a really great idea ...

I loved following the steps! I don't have a drop of artistic ability, but I love watching other people draw. :D To tell you the truth, I actually liked your ...

A very creative idea, despite you being "Creatively blind." ;) (That was also my favourite line). I don't know much about the structure of poetry, so if I correct some ...

My little sister is five. I know exactly what you mean about giving anything to play with her. I hardly ever have time. I couldn't imagine losing her, and I'm ...

This was posted earlier in the form of an exercise I tried with no dialogue tags or extra description. Yeah...that didn't work too well, so I completely rewrote it. It ...

Hello, Bunny dear! This was a very different piece for you but no less fantastic. :) Even though Alphonse has this supernatural ability, he seems very natural. By that I ...

Hey! First of all, if this is a true story, I'm deeply sorry for you. ;) This was extremely short. I would love to see more detail and descriptions. :D ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! :) Originally, this came from a dream I had about an author talking with one of her characters. I am a huge fan of dialogue ...

I'm sure someone a little younger than 16 could handle this, but there is some suggested violence. Enjoy. :) “Go on.” “I can’t.” “Of course you can. Just do it!” ...

Hi, Stori! I really enjoyed reading this, but I feel like there should be more to this story than you've given us. I kept looking to see if there was ...

Hey, Pari! I didn't think this was at all too long for a short story. I would probably rate it PG to PG-13 for language. :) I really enjoyed this ...

Hey there, Lele! I'm interested to see where you take this. I agree that you could make it a little longer and give us just slightly more information to draw ...